i am 14 and would love to publish my book, Can you please tell me what you think of it? Plus can you rate it ,?
Kaci , is a new girl starting college, she is very pretty and sweet. Her only parent died and she lives with her aunty. Her aunty has to go on a buisness trip so she is to move and stay with her cousins for a couple of weeks. Now Kaci starts College, she sits on a spare desk , not knowing it is not spare. It belongs to a young , built boy named Drake. Drake is a murderer. His mother left him and took his sister and ran of when he was a young kid. He hates any girl that reminds him of his mother. His father bet him all the time when he was younger as his father was always drunk. Kaci does not know Drake murders girls one by one so she accepts to go out with him, on the College’s prom night she finds her self in great danger….
I know the grammer is not good but that is because i am quickly writing this. (Sorry).
Please Comment and rate my Story line.
i really like it but put way more details and let the fact that drake is a murderer a secret to make it more dramatic and keep you on edge to find out i have a lot of trouble writing stories but yours is very good i would love to read it 
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